Serves those bullies right. Me like.
Author's Response: Hi there angel, sorry i've been a bit slow. Have been slowly terminating from writing. Too much criticising, can't stand it on fanfic.net.But im thinking of revamping for the very last time, another elflings story for you. Give me some time, i'll try but i guess if you understand i'm a bit of a veteran when it comes to writing and receiving reviews. I've gotten too many flames in my liking,so im sorta drained of writing that makes me happy. I'll try to think of a cute elflings plot Yun
I loved it!
"Worn sword carrying hands" is grammericly incorrect.
"Caulused, sword-welding hands" is more grammerical. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for the tip and review wyn! I'll be sure to fix it, half the time i'm up late at night when i write these. So i'll try to fix everything possible okies?! Yun
The way you wrote this is so much like tolkein himself, you could pass off your writing as his. Well done!
Author's Response: Thankyou bodo, i'm glad you enjoyed it! And really,can pass of as tolkien? lol Yun