First off, I'm enjoying your series of haikus. :) I love how you can fit so much in 17 syllables! You're really talented. I like this one in particular because it's so silly and it shows a different aspect of Legolas who's usually serious, or fierce or observant. GOOD JOB! :)
Merry! Just because you are not fat, does not mean that you have any right to complain about only eating FOUR times a day. I eat three.
:) Great work on this one as well!
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment and the review! :-D
Of course Aragorn does not care if he smells bad or not. He is a RANGER for peats sake.
That was really cute thought.
Well, he might want to consider smell if he's tracking something. If it got down-wind of him it would know where he was and run far, far away. Thanks for the review!
Gosh, Gandalf is being quite mean to poor old Pip!
Author's Response: Gandalf has a low tolerance for foolishness throughout the books. I didn't mean for him to sound so grumpy though! Thanks for the review!
Poor Legolas! I can't believe that and I also cannot picture Leggy with greasy hair! Wow...
Author's Response: I feel sorrier for Pippin! But yeah, a greasy-haired Legolas isn't a normal image. I can't see it! Thanks for the review!
These are so funny! Though I think it would be a better idea to post them in one story, rather than separate ones. But whatever.
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought of that after I had written five haikus. I'm putting them all in a series. I have all sorts of little haikus in my head for different characters from Middle-earth. If you have any requests, let me know!
This series of haiku is a very clever concept. As a fan of the form, I encourage you to make your haiku as densely meaningful as possible.
Author's Response: I will do more meaningful haikus after I finish these silly ones. I'm glad you like the idea of LOTR haikus. Thanks for the review!