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I love Haiku, and Merry is my second favorite character. Woo!
I love how this haiku captured Sam's protectiveness, loyalty and worries in that part of the story. :)
First off, I'm enjoying your series of haikus. :) I love how you can fit so much in 17 syllables! You're really talented. I like this one in particular because it's so silly and it shows a different aspect of Legolas who's usually serious, or fierce or observant. GOOD JOB! :)
Wait wait wait... Pippin... ATE it!?!?
I really laughed at this, having read Legolas haiku 1st.
*choking on my own giggles*
Merry! Just because you are not fat, does not mean that you have any right to complain about only eating FOUR times a day. I eat three.
:) Great work on this one as well!
-Midnight §
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment and the review! :-D
Pippin, Pippin, Pippin. When will he ever learn? Eating shampoo is not good for you.
Very cute!
-Midnight §
Author's Response: Thanks!
Of course Aragorn does not care if he smells bad or not. He is a RANGER for peats sake.
That was really cute thought.
-Midnight §
Author's Response:
Well, he might want to consider smell if he's tracking something. If it got down-wind of him it would know where he was and run far, far away. Thanks for the review!
Yes, it IS Gollum's fault. It is ALWAYS his fault! I blame everything on him. Great job. -Midnight §
Author's Response: Thank you! And I agree, Gollum is usually behind all the sneaky stuff, isn't he?
Gosh, Gollum REALLY wants that ring back, he wants it back enough that he resorts to cussing it out. -Midnight §
Gosh, Gandalf is being quite mean to poor old Pip!
-Midnight §
Author's Response: Gandalf has a low tolerance for foolishness throughout the books. I didn't mean for him to sound so grumpy though! Thanks for the review!
Poor Legolas! I can't believe that and I also cannot picture Leggy with greasy hair! Wow...
-Midnight §
Author's Response: I feel sorrier for Pippin! But yeah, a greasy-haired Legolas isn't a normal image. I can't see it! Thanks for the review!
Goodness this makes me laugh.
-Lorian
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
These are so funny! Though I think it would be a better idea to post them in one story, rather than separate ones. But whatever.
~Faramiriel
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought of that after I had written five haikus. I'm putting them all in a series. I have all sorts of little haikus in my head for different characters from Middle-earth. If you have any requests, let me know!
Haha! I love it! So cute!
~Faramiriel
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you like them! I'm not one to write poetry, so the fact that my little haikus are pleasing people makes me happy!
You've chosen one of my favorite bits.
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you like it!
This series of haiku is a very clever concept. As a fan of the form, I encourage you to make your haiku as densely meaningful as possible.
Author's Response: I will do more meaningful haikus after I finish these silly ones. I'm glad you like the idea of LOTR haikus. Thanks for the review!
"That fool of a Took"...mwahaha! Poor Pip. Lovely job again :-D
Author's Response: Thank you!