Reviews For 25 Fluffy Fics
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Reviewer: Lisse Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/08/10 - 01:23 pm Title: 25 Fluffy fics: 3. Catch Me If You Can

Very sweet and teasing. I think Legolas and Rumel make a good pair.

Reviewer: Lisse Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/07/10 - 12:07 pm Title: 25 Fluffy fics: 2. Breakfast In Bed

I like the pairing. It is a very sweet scene. I enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Elvellon_en_Legolas Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/12/07 - 07:10 pm Title: 25 Fluffy fics: 4. Those Eyes

Beautiful fic! so sweet! You can really see the love, passion between them. I love it, thanks! I can hardly wait for the next one.

Elvellon_en_Legolas

Reviewer: Turemela Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/10/06 - 09:28 pm Title: 25 Fluffy fics: 4. Those Eyes

I don't understand the part where he says that he could give his word that she hadn't run..When did she run? and the word "vandalizing" that Raleon uses in the same sentence as "honey" i think you meant womanizing..I don't think it's useless..it just needs some clean-up

Author's Response: yeah, in the other chapters i had fixed so much of this stufff, but then the site crashed and it all went down the drain....i'll go over when i get home from school tomarrow.

Author's Response: yeah, in the other chapters i had fixed so much of this stufff, but then the site crashed and it all went down the drain....i'll go over when i get home from school tomarrow.

Reviewer: Turemela Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/10/06 - 08:30 pm Title: 25 Fluffy fics: 4. Those Eyes

"my sweet" maybe ..something like that...honey just sounds off to me..I'll re read it again..when I get the chance.

Author's Response: my sweet...that does sound better....

Reviewer: Turemela Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/10/06 - 12:57 pm Title: 25 Fluffy fics: 4. Those Eyes

I was a bit confused towards the middle..but I love the dialogue at the begining..

The only thing that seemed out of place was Raeleon using the word "honey"

Please keep it up.

Author's Response: okay.... my sis said that this chapter could use some work too... do you think it's too out of place? Have any suggestions on what other endearment i should use?

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/06 - 12:39 pm Title: 25 Fluffy fics: 2. Breakfast In Bed

Cute! I liked it! This probably sounds incredibly stupid, but I actually have no idea who Rumil is. Still, good story and well-written. Update soon?

Author's Response: Well... Rumil is Haldir's brother. Thank you for your review, i'm glad that you enjoyed of it, parts 3 & 4 are ready, hope you love them as well. Keep smiling, Sivan Shemesh

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