Oops! I did not realize that this was a series, but silly me, it actually makes more sense that way (and actually, I'm happy, because there is more of this for me to read)! Yet again, I had to keep myself from laughing like a maniac. Very well done and I really enjoy how unique your idea is. On to the next chapter!
Oh. My. Gosh. My mom is sleeping in our living room right now and I literally had to cover my mouth and bite my tongue to keep from laughing! This is fantastic and very creative! Keep up the good work, and expect to see more comments from me in the future!