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Reviewer: Gwilwileth Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/05/12 - 01:58 am Title: Dragon fire-second Oathbound tale

heyy this is Amazingg ,, just a question in the first part who is 'the elf' thankss xxxx

Author's Response: Legolas :) xx

Reviewer: Gwilwileth Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/05/12 - 12:04 pm Title: Oathbound

i think the characters in this story sound loving,, the imagery put forward is cool/ amazing but you really need to finish the story ;D xx

Author's Response: Thank you :) I will finish the story asap,still got 7 chapters to go though x

Reviewer: Gwilwileth Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/05/12 - 12:00 pm Title: The Wedding of Legolas

i really liked this story... i hope your exams go well :D x

Author's Response: Thank you :) x

Reviewer: Wild Flower Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/05/12 - 02:48 pm Title: The Wedding of Legolas

Awwww! The ending of this chapter is perfect. :) There were a few spelling mistakes though like "replyed" which should be "replied" but that's no biggie. :)

Reviewer: Wild Flower Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/05/12 - 02:31 pm Title: Oathbound

I love this chapter! :) I like Eruanna because she's not needy and whiney like I expected female characters to be. Oh and good job on the romance, too. :) Good luck on your exams! :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much :) hope you like the rest of it :) x

Reviewer: Wild Flower Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/12 - 02:32 pm Title: Oathbound

amazing imagery! you did a great job in describing the setting. it made your story rich and interesting. i'm excited to read the rest of your story. :) keep it up! :D

Author's Response: thank you :) this is just the start of a big adventure-this one is the fellow ship of the ring hope you enjoy the rest of it xx :)

Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/04/12 - 01:55 am Title: The Wedding of Legolas

Love it!!!! XO
Canīt wait to see how the story will be evolving from now on... XD

Author's Response: Thank you,this is very encouraging,:D

Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/12 - 03:47 am Title: The Wedding of Legolas

Awwwwww!!!!!!! That was so sweat!!! XD

Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/12 - 02:45 am Title: The Wedding of Legolas

Nice!

Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/12 - 09:21 pm Title: The Wedding of Legolas

That was beautiful!!! XD

Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/03/12 - 10:34 pm Title: The Wedding of Legolas

Awwwwww! Thatīs cute!! XD

Author's Response: Thank youu :)

Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/03/12 - 02:34 am Title: The Wedding of Legolas

Interesting story! :) Well written and realistic!!! but I must agree with Domestic Duchess, I am by no means an autor or anything but Ithink if you reread the chapters you would be able to fix it or you could ask the help of a Beta...

Reviewer: Domestic Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/03/12 - 03:51 am Title: The Wedding of Legolas

Hello! I see you are a new member here, so welcome! I will make one suggestion. YOu don't seem to have much if any punctuation. It makes it difficult to read or makes me not want to continue reading. I'm not a grammer nazi by any means, but it is necessary or it makes the story and sentences confusing. Good for you, though, for putting yourself out there and getting out of your comfort zone!

Author's Response: thank you, ill fix it asap i was in a hurry writing it :)

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