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Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/07 - 03:00 pm Title: Chapter One

Okaaay...I posted a review yesterday, but it hasn't appereared, so I'd better post another one ^_^
Happy Legolas didn't really die! Great fic!

Author's Response: I guess there was a glitch somewhere. Legolas not dying is a happy thing, I agree. :o) I'm pleased you liked it.

Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/07 - 07:42 pm Title: Chapter One

I read this on Teitho and enjoyed it: thanks for reposting it here! I like the moral that Aragorn draws from his experience.

Author's Response: I'm very pleased you enjoyed my little tale. You are very welcome. I think it helps him to grow as a person.

Reviewer: Raine Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/04/07 - 10:19 pm Title: Chapter One

I now hate your writing, WhiteWolf... blegh. Never... Ever... EVER KILL LEGOLAS AGAIN!!! He's my friend. He DOESN'T DESERVE TO DIE!!! WHAT IN ARDA HAS HE DONE TO YOU!?!
I bet someone takes them back in time... or something... they better...

Ok... now to the CC. I think Arwen is slightly out of character in her speech. At times, it doesn't sound... em... right.

EX: "You usually take great pleasure in greeting me before I reach you to let me know you heard my steps."

It's just hard for me to imagine Arwen saying that in that manner...

One more thing that isn't your fault: "...omer"
I hate it when it does that... I think on one of the moderator's posts, they say a way to fix that.

Otherwise, you've got me in suspense that I will kill for to have completed. You'll be sorry... Hmph.

Could you read/review my fic? I'd really appreciate it... I've looked up to you for about two years now...
Cuz I'm Alatariel (Don't know if you remember me reviewing) But you have always been my favorite author.

Until now...

Lol jk. PLEASE update soon... so I don't have to murder my bestest bestest friend... lol.

GREAT STORY SO FAR! *throws letters in the air*

You have to use that many letters next time... I think that was a full bag containing about one million letters, a-z. Use them. :P

Ok, I'll stop my rant. Nice job...
I've said that a million times now, I do believe...
So I'll stop and end with yet another

PLEASE update soon!

Author's Response: The story isn't over yet. The next chapter will explain everything, so hang in there. This is the first LOTR story in which I've included Arwen, so I'm not used to writing her. I'm sorry you don't like my portrayal of her. I'll try to fix that other problem when I get the chance. Thanks for pointing it out. I'm glad you like my work. I'll read something of yours, but I have to warn you, it will be a while. I have a very long list of stories to read, but I will get to it. I'm pleased you like the story so far, despite the way the first chapter ended. :o) More will be along soon.

Reviewer: elfchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/04/07 - 06:14 pm Title: Chapter One

So sad; it really reminds me of MC's story "Dark Visions." Similar title and summary...

Author's Response: It *is* sad. I read that story years ago, and though the title and summary are similar, the stories are totally different. I hope you like this one.

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/04/07 - 04:23 pm Title: Chapter One

Aw... So sad *Sniffs*

Author's Response: Yeah, it is. But there's more. :o)

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