"calm their inner fan-girls who were leaping off the walls and screaming until only bats and dolphins could hear them at the sight that met them"
LOL!! Hilarious! Please do continue. This story cracks me up, and is real sweet at the same time :)
You have me completely hooked on this story. Continue! I've read only a few stories like this with Orlando and yours is one of the best. And who doesn't like Orlando . . . (I mean really!)
Author's Response: Oh wow, I am actually blushing! Thankyou so much for completely saving my day from the pits of despair! I'm so glad you like it! :D Agreed, Mr Bloom is certainly easy on the eye! I will be updating again as soon as I get all my work out of the way. But thankyou so much for saying such nice things!! xx
P.S. I love you! Damn thing cut that off and that's the most important thing, in my opinion. :P
Author's Response: hello love! oooh bless you! Its been so long since i've written anything I was so worried that i have lost all forms of coherent writing so its so good to get good feedback (last night with so many reads and no reviews i was starting to fear, but i can pacify those demons with the thought that it was just you reading and rereading...haha. No seriously, thankyou for your lovely words, i miss you. I'm sooooooooo glad you enjoyed it! (and yes of course i got steph perfect!). :) xxxx
I would first like to say that your final paragraph blew me away. It was a-fucking-mazing! Seriously! You really have no idea how much this update has pleased me. I've missed you and your writing so much, obviously, that I couldn't wait to get on the computer once work set me free and read the rest of what I had started before I left earlier.
In all aspects, you certainly have Steph to an art of what this Steph would be and would act. And don't think I didn't cry out in dismay at that amazing cliffhanger you threw at the end. *wags finger* If I didn't love you so much I'd think you were trying to torture me. haha
Okay, it's late, I'm rambling. The truth is, you rock my socks off and this chapter was great. I can't wait for the next one and hope we can talk soon.
Yay! About time for an update! I was beginning to think I'd never get more to the story...it was an okay chapter, indeedy it was...but when is the really real good stuff gonna happen, huh? LOL...canna wait till you find time for more.
Author's Response: Aww no i could never ever abandon it! I'm so glad some you are still excited about this story! Oooooh, stick with me, i promise the good stuff is coming! :) Thankyou for reviewing and keeping me sane! xxxxx
I don't know when you will get this.... but you know..... you will very soon have finished your essays and uni work for the year, and you will need to keep your creative juices flowing, keep your english knowledge alight.... so..... should I expect the next chapter soon? good.
I love you
As much as you want to say this is rubbish (shame on you!!!) I have to say that I rather enjoyed it. Quite very much. You tickled me pink with the cucumber reference-thank you!! :D And, well, considering that I can't deny (as much as I'd want to ahahaha) my insanity and how much it's personally similar, I will continue to say that I rather think that it was a very enjoyable transition chapter. As unpleasant as those can be, I remember sadly in my own story writing case, I think you did a wonderful job. I screamed in joy at the yahoo message about the update and I can't wait to scream in joy again at the next update! Yay for writing freedom! *heart*
P.S. Talk soon, yeah?
Author's Response: haha i did shove that in because i know how much you love it. I was meant to put a note at the start, but im glad you spotted it! Haha, thankyou for liking it!! And definately talk soon! I well miss you!1 xx
Hello Ben and Jerry's oh how I have missed you.
I LOVE this chapter.
Cant wait for all the dirty fun stuff to begin.
I really should do some more.... but I have lost the plot.
Author's Response: aww thankyou hun!! haha liar. its awful..and then and then and then, its like a story i wrote when i was wee. Anyway. thankyou for reveiwing. miss you xxxx
Since you have been extremly faithful of revewing my *cough* work in progress... I thought that I would return the favor.
That being said.. I did not expect to like it so much! haha. You are a great writer and you keep everyone entertained. I bow down to... teach me your ways oh master.
So update! I want to know what happens next!
Author's Response: Bwahahaha thankyou my dear! Glad you enjoyed it! x
I was also slightly confused when I read the start of the chapter - I was a bit like "woooah what did I miss here?!" lol. I loved this installment, I love how it's all building up slowly. I was so happy when he asked for her number aswell, cannot wait for the next chapter!