Okay, the first thing that came out of my mouth when I started reading this chapter was, "Wait, I don't remember the last chapter ending like that..." Which then prompted me into going back to chapter 7, at which point I went, "Ohhhhhh. You sneak, you!" :P
Very hot- the beginning. I have alway enjoyed the amazing way you describe, well, smut, and you brought on the cheek flushes in me.
And it's crazy and funny how much I'm like the Steph in this story. Of course, you know me, Orlando is always the casanova in my mind. :P
And just so you know, I would never implode or explode over Orlando. Never. That's just not how I roll, okay?
Okay, maybe... Oh hell, yeah, I would and I think I did a little when I read you had updated!
More soon, yeah? I love you insanely!
Author's Response: Thank heaven for that! I was really nervous about you reading the rudey rudey bit in it. But i'm glad you enjoyed it. Hahaha, you would so implode. tee hee!! xxxxx
I actually SQUEAKED at the innuendos.
This was brilliant. The sex dream was.... sexy and dreamy.
Sidi is the best dog in the world [after Rohan] and Orlando is beautiful and better do terribly filthy things to the French lady very soon.
I love it.
Author's Response: hahaha! aww i'm glad you enjoyed it! I hope it was a silent squeak as everyone is asleep...hahaha. Thankyou Lovely!!!! xxxxxxx
I'm going to tell you something very bizarre. You left me a review saying you'd read my story ages ago and forgot who it was by, I decided to read yours to return the favour and I discover that this is also a story I started reading a while ago but couldn't find!
Very few stories hold my interest, but I've just read the whole thing through without stopping and not wanting it to end. You are a really good writer and I'll definately be looking out for an update!
Author's Response: Haha!! That is odd. Obviously it is fate! Aww thankyou!rnxx
The sexual tension is killing me! I fully expect vivid moments later that will make me blush. :D
I know I've already told you but I still love the breaking her face to crumble to his carpet for such a cause.
Chapter 8 will be the highlight of you my life, you know.
Author's Response: hahaha!! ooh this is why i shouldnt give you hints! Oh well, i hope that when the next chapter comes, it is fulfilling enough!rnThankyou!!rnrnxx
I looooooooooooooooooove it.
And you. [Its Haddock here by the way} as if i just referred to myself as haddock. I never do that.
Anyhow. MORE SOON PLEASE.
I am attempting some writing.... but it's going shit. Not got many ideas.
Author's Response: I knew it was you!! Fabulous!!rnrnxxx
Alright, you're going to have to trust me when I say I am no snob. But it did take me this long to get around to actually READING any stories on here. (I've been busy, I swear) Anyways, I read your story.... and read it again. I really liked it! I love the way you've written Tilly, and the interactions she has with Orli... hahaha yeah you tell him! Ahem, anyways, this is also an essay of a review, so I will sign off by begging, no... pleading you to post more soon! xx L
Author's Response: Haha, its fine, i never had you down for a snob (not even secretly whispered behind cupped hands). Thankyou for reading once let alone twice(!!) and i promise, more is on the way (even if i am slightly inebriated while i write this and a portion of the next chapter...:s)rnxxx
Hey, welcome to Lotr fanfiction! You've made quite a start to your story. I really enjoyed the vivid description of the heatwave, the passengers on the bus, and the boys playing. They were well observed and seemed true to life. Isn't it always the case that one of the group wants to play pirates when everyone else is a samurai? I noticed an apostrophe slipping into the plural of samurai, btw.
Author's Response: Thankyou! That pesky apostrophe has been taken out back and shot.