I like the comic twist at the end of the story, where it could have been sententious. Nicely done! Also, as a non-Luthien-lookalike myself, I find it a comforting thought.
Author's Response: Hee. Yes, that was my intention. Pithy and slow and pithypithypithy and then enter the crack. xD Happy you enjoyed it, Ria. Thank you. *hugs*