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Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/05/09 - 01:57 am Title: Chapter. 6. Priorities and What Truly Matters

I think the POV changes are clear enough that you don't need to signal them by saying "Legolas POV" etcetera.

You've taken the time to let the characters' thoughts and motivations develop well in this fic. Your Boromir, in particular, seems well-rounded and human.

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments. I will keep your comments about POV changes in mind for future chapters. I am used to writing for fanfiction where that is more or less expected. As to your comments I wasn't sure that I had kept Boromir especially in character so thank you for that comment. I look forward to future comments and suggestions.

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/09/07 - 11:25 am Title: Chapter 4. More explanations & a couple of theories

:D Thanks for updating. I really like this fic!

Author's Response: I am glad to hear that you are still enjoying this and I will try and get another chapter as soon as I can.

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/07 - 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 2. Time runs out

Normally I don't like Boromir/Legolas, but this is a good story!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing and I am glad I have peaked your interest in this pairing. Normally I agree with you about the pairing but I had this idea about Boromir that I really wanted to try and besides its nice to show his sensitive side other than the usual way he is depicted. Next chapter should be up in a couple of weeks.

Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/05/07 - 04:13 am Title: Chapter 1. Prologue

I like the suspense you begin with, and it's good to see Gandalf taking a strong role. It rather sounds as if Legolas is going to undertake some sort of Near Death Experience. I guess I'll have to read some more to find out.



My one quibble: You have a few run-on sentences and missing commas. (Eg, "Fret not, young one. It may still be a moot point." and "I am sure Lord Elrond explained the importance of the timing to you. Will you be able to help with that, do you think?")

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to let me know what you thought. I have had this story kicking around in many versions for a while and I believe this is the right one to post. As for your comments well shall we say that the experience is near love than death. In regard to my run on sentences I will try and be careful about those in the future.

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