oh. very well written. I like the last line. And to think orcs were once elves... a great loss to the great Eru.
Author's Response: Thanks. I was trying to lead up to saying something about that later on. So sad. Anyways, thanks for the review.
I love this! like sharpe said, you portray arwen so vividly and beautifully. I wish I could write like this. so beautiful...
Author's Response: Awe, thanks! It took me a while to think of how best to describe her... ageless beauty is hard to put into words. And thanks for adding it to your favorites, now I feel special! =D
This was so incredibly beautiful. Your descriptions of Arwen were absolutely breath taking. I've never read anything like this. Please add more...I will be adding this to my favorites. Fabulous work! ~God bless
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I worked really hard on this, and since I'm not used to writing anything except cross-overs and parodys, I wasn't really sure of it. Thanks again!