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Title: Chapter 1-10 Reviewer: bedb Signed
very very good

Author's Response: Thank you very much...and keep posted. This will become still better and much more exciting!
Date: 14/06/07 - 08:30 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4 Reviewer: Nienna Calafalas Signed
Wonderful story, and getting better all the time.

Author's Response: Thank you, Nienna, for this nice review. I hope you stay posted. There will be many surprises. Cheers Griffon
Date: 02/06/07 - 04:14 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1-10 Reviewer: Ria Signed
I've only read the first two parts of the story (the prologue and Chapter 1). First, let me say that I would not have guessed that you're not a native English speaker: the part that I read was clear and well-written. There were a few typos, but that's normal in any long composition. You seem versed in your Middle Earth history, and I like the way you built in Silraen's back story. I think it would be easier to read this if you put the chapters you wrote each into a separate chapter. The formatting is pretty easy, and it makes it much easier to read for people like me who can only read a little at a time.

I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.

Author's Response: Dear Ria, thank you very much for the kind review and I am pleased that you like this story. I shall heed your advice and will post the next chapters individually, but since this was my first time to post on lotrfanfiction and the guidelines seemed strict, I wanted to show a rather consistent part of a story and not some icly tidybit. Please continue reading and I am always happy to have a feedback. Griffon
Date: 30/05/07 - 02:05 pm [Report This]
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