Hi. Well I agree with you when you say you should rewrite this but it does have a good plot and the speech is very well written for the twins as they seem in character. Well done, keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks! I keep saying I need to rewrite it but it'll probably never happen, I have too much stuff to do these days... Thanks for the review anyway, who knows, one day I might rewrite it - Breia
OMG, I just realised no one's ever reviewed this! NOT EVEN ME!!! O.O I always loved this one, I'm not sure why though. Great story, congrats on the review, as I barely ever come on anymore. ^.^'
Author's Response: Hmm, actually, someone else did review this but on a different site, they reviewed every chapter i think. Anyway, it's nice to know you still love me *grins* See you later - Li