I like this one ... it's sad and horrible but beautiful ... like all ... depressive, writings... I agree with you on the orange one too, it's a weird colour but the fruit is totally awesome :P Yet another great job - Breia
It shows the power of simplicity of writing and the complexity of thoughts and feelings.
Author's Response: Thanks! That gives me a feeling of accomplishment. I'm glad you liked it! ~Mel
What can I say? This is amazing, simple but amazingly powerful. I have a high opinion of you (nothing but the best) and this poem lives up to it.
Author's Response: Ohh, thank you so much! I'll be sure to write more! ~Mel
copyrighted? hee hee thats something different. great poem mel.
Author's Response: Glad you liked my poem! I was afraid you would find it too dark! ; ) And yeah, I started copyrighting my fics and poems because of all that FanLib business; I don't want my work stolen. ~Mel