Well, the story is cute and fluffy, as advertised. The ending was terribly sweet.
I am hugely impressed that you write this well in a non-native language. I did catch some misspellings, if you want them: defiantly for definitely, union for unison, and blonde for blond (the silent e form is feminine, and Glorfindel *fanning herself* is hot -- I mean, not.)
Author's Response: Haha, yes it cute and fluffy as promised. I have now corrected all the spelling mistakes, thank you for pointing them out for me! It’s hard to find them in your own text, you’re get blind when rereading it so many times.