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Reviewer: Daewen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/10/09 - 11:59 am Title: Chapter 1

I love how you start each stanza. Beautiful and very descriptive.

Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/07/07 - 02:42 am Title: Chapter 1

That's really good, Sweetie. The rhyme scheme is sufficiently subtle and the imagery is lovely and vivid. You have a couple of misplaced apostrophes, however: it's means "it is," while its means "belonging to it".

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