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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Daewen Signed
I love how you start each stanza. Beautiful and very descriptive.
Date: 29/10/09 - 07:59 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Ria Signed
That's really good, Sweetie. The rhyme scheme is sufficiently subtle and the imagery is lovely and vivid. You have a couple of misplaced apostrophes, however: it's means "it is," while its means "belonging to it".
Date: 25/07/07 - 10:42 pm [Report This]
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