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Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/07 - 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 2: A New World

I like this!

Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/07 - 01:01 am Title: Chapter 2: A New World

Your world is very well visualized and described. I like how it really seems to be coming at me through Frodo's senses. Also I love the concept of an adventure between Arda and Aman.

That said, I find Eltir's made-up dialect jarring. It doesn't operate by any set of grammatical rules I recognize. I'm all for you inventing a dialect, but I think it would be wise to sit down beforehand and think up the grammatical rules (eg, is "thy" a subject pronoun or a possessive adjective? Is 'tis not short for "it is" ?)

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