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"Among the great". This is a beautiful sentence and I think you deserve marvellous credit for this story. Besides a few spelling/grammar mistakes it is very well written and the dialogue of each character is distinct. Well done!
Beautiful... I never thought what would happen when they would all pass away... I thought Legolas and Gimli would be the last ones, though...
I was quite moved by this story. Merry and especially Pippin are my favourite Hobbit charactes and the tale of their last years is a bit short in the Appendices. This story portrays their last days excellently. The way you describe their departure is not overdone or cliché. Thank you for writing this.
Author's Response: Thank-you! I am glad you enjoyed it!
Awww! I'm almost crying. Very well written.
iggybaby
Author's Response: Thank-you iggybaby!
awww! poor pippin!
iggybaby
that's so sad! No merry!
iggybaby
A very touching and worthy ending. I look forward to your next story.
Author's Response: Thank-you Karlmir Stonewain!
This was so nice. It wasn't overdone, yet it was really beautiful. Great work!
Author's Response: Thank-you!
Beutiful yet sad story. I found the paragraph on the deserted Rivendell particulary moving, briliant work.
Author's Response: Thank-you very much!
typical pippin. always food with him. poor faramir. i hope he will see her again.
iggybaby
Author's Response: Yes, Pippin always seems to have food with him. Thanks for reading.
awww! so sad! i love this story!
iggybaby
Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thanks!
I like this; a bittersweet, view of what might have happened to Merry and Pip.
Keep it up!
NZ
Author's Response: Thank-you for reviewing! I am glad you like it!
A bittersweet tale - very well told.
Author's Response: thanks!