"Among the great". This is a beautiful sentence and I think you deserve marvellous credit for this story. Besides a few spelling/grammar mistakes it is very well written and the dialogue of each character is distinct. Well done!
I was quite moved by this story. Merry and especially Pippin are my favourite Hobbit charactes and the tale of their last years is a bit short in the Appendices. This story portrays their last days excellently. The way you describe their departure is not overdone or cliché. Thank you for writing this.
Author's Response: Thank-you! I am glad you enjoyed it!