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Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/09/07 - 11:49 am Title: Love Is More Powerful Than Death

Interesting story! The only question I have is this: Was the a special reason the orc wanted Elladan poisoned? Or was it just random chance?

Author's Response: No one was sure whether the people who supplied that poison wanted Elladan dead, they were more focused on rnkeeping him alive. Thanks for reading and giving my a new idea.

Author's Response: No one was sure whether the people who supplied that poison wanted Elladan dead, they were more focused on rnkeeping him alive. Thanks for reading and giving my a new idea.

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/09/07 - 05:19 pm Title: Love Is More Powerful Than Death

I find myself frustrated. You have potential, and some of your stuff is absoloutly brilliant! I just feel that sometimes your charactersiztion of the characters is off, and sometimes the plot deepens, but without offering explanation...

Author's Response: um, i'm confused. explain please

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/09/07 - 02:22 pm Title: Hallucinations & Lullabies

Thanks for upating. Are we gonna find out who poisioned 'Dan, or is it going to remain a mystery?

Author's Response: All in good time my friend, all in good time. Em

Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/09/07 - 01:23 pm Title: He's Been Poisoned!

Good story so far! Cant wait to find out how it ends.

Author's Response: Thanks. i'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/07 - 01:54 pm Title: Poison's & Antidotes

I think this is really coming along, although you still need to link the chapters smoothly, but you're probably working on that. I really like it!

Reviewer: arulia34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/07 - 07:05 am Title: Poison's & Antidotes

Really good, Dan, but I don't get it - suddenly Elrohir is ill. You better not be using MY poison!
Really good, I hope to hear more soon.

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/07 - 01:38 pm Title: Poison's & Antidotes

I like it, but again I think you could have put another chapter before this, to bulk it out a bit. Sorry I haven't got around to emailing you yet, I have a pile of work the size of Mount Doom at the moment. I think we might be in different timezones as well, which makes things even more difficult *Sighs*

Author's Response: Don't worry about it too much. Just take your time and thank you for reviewing. I started writning another chapter to rnthis but it may alter the storyline a bit. Thanks again.

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