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Title: Love Is More Powerful Than Death Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
Interesting story! The only question I have is this: Was the a special reason the orc wanted Elladan poisoned? Or was it just random chance?

Author's Response: No one was sure whether the people who supplied that poison wanted Elladan dead, they were more focused on rnkeeping him alive. Thanks for reading and giving my a new idea.

Author's Response: No one was sure whether the people who supplied that poison wanted Elladan dead, they were more focused on rnkeeping him alive. Thanks for reading and giving my a new idea.
Date: 09/19/07 07:49 am [Report This]
Title: Love Is More Powerful Than Death Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
I find myself frustrated. You have potential, and some of your stuff is absoloutly brilliant! I just feel that sometimes your charactersiztion of the characters is off, and sometimes the plot deepens, but without offering explanation...

Author's Response: um, i'm confused. explain please
Date: 09/15/07 01:19 pm [Report This]
Title: Hallucinations & Lullabies Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Thanks for upating. Are we gonna find out who poisioned 'Dan, or is it going to remain a mystery?

Author's Response: All in good time my friend, all in good time. Em
Date: 09/14/07 10:22 am [Report This]
Title: He's Been Poisoned! Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
Good story so far! Cant wait to find out how it ends.

Author's Response: Thanks. i'm glad you liked it.
Date: 09/14/07 09:23 am [Report This]
Title: Poison's & Antidotes Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
I think this is really coming along, although you still need to link the chapters smoothly, but you're probably working on that. I really like it!
Date: 09/11/07 09:54 am [Report This]
Title: Poison's & Antidotes Reviewer: arulia34 Signed
Really good, Dan, but I don't get it - suddenly Elrohir is ill. You better not be using MY poison!
Really good, I hope to hear more soon.
Date: 09/11/07 03:05 am [Report This]
Title: Poison's & Antidotes Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
I like it, but again I think you could have put another chapter before this, to bulk it out a bit. Sorry I haven't got around to emailing you yet, I have a pile of work the size of Mount Doom at the moment. I think we might be in different timezones as well, which makes things even more difficult *Sighs*

Author's Response: Don't worry about it too much. Just take your time and thank you for reviewing. I started writning another chapter to rnthis but it may alter the storyline a bit. Thanks again.
Date: 09/09/07 09:38 am [Report This]
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