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Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/09/07 - 04:36 pm Title: Truths Revealed

lol, yep, I enjoyed it, so it wasn't a complete waste of time getting in trouble with your maths teacher! Really good scene!

Author's Response: No it wasn't but trust me when i say she can be very scary sometimes. I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply but i rncan't stop writing and i've been focusing on more on my fics that still aren't finished. Thanks for reviewing - Li

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Date: 19/09/07 - 05:52 pm Title: Ambush on the Borders of Lothlorien

Thanks for updating! This is a really interesting fic and I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and i'm glad you enjoyed it - Li

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Date: 16/09/07 - 02:23 pm Title: In the Middle of the Night

Very good! I'm planning on emailing you tonight regarding your other fic. As soon as I finish my homework!

Author's Response: I don't have much to say but thanks for reviewing - Li

Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/07 - 02:18 am Title: In the Middle of the Night

Aha! Ominous herbs. Is it mind-altering medicine as it was in "With You to the End"?

Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/07 - 02:09 am Title: Foreseeing Terrible Events

Ooh, scary premonition. I really like that she hurt Elrohir in the vision -- it makes it more ambiguous and disturbing. If I had to vote for how the story would go, I'd have it be one of those situations where her attempts to avert the vision actually make it happen, Oedipus-style. (I'd still hope everyone survived, though). Really, there are lots of ways it could go.

Btw, you're missing a few commas in the dialogue. It can make the sentences seem a little unwieldy.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and i'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, i've kind of been neglecting this story ever since i rnfinished writing it. I suppose i can add it to my list of bad habits. Thanks for reviewing and i'm glad you liked it - Li

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/09/07 - 04:52 pm Title: Foreseeing Terrible Events

I definitly think your writing is getting better! I'm a bit confused as to why Sylfaen struck Elrohir, and why she flew into a tree when the orc pushed her downwards, unless it was a fallen tree...Out of curiousity, do you have a beta?

Author's Response: No i don't but i undetrstand what went wrong. i'll fix it asap

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