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Reviewer: neilia Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/09/07 - 07:36 pm Title: I'm Not Safe Unless I'm With You

It is good. The transitions were a bit rocky, but clear enough not to lose the reader. Twins usually do feel safer together than apart. Thank you for a good story. Neilia

Author's Response: Thanks, i'm glad you enjoyed it. This was inspired by arulia34's I Won The Race. if you enjoyed this one perhaps tryrn reading that one unless you already have. thanks for reviewing - Em

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/09/07 - 01:29 pm Title: I'm Not Safe Unless I'm With You

It was quite good actually :D I really liked it, I think you write the twins really well!

Author's Response: Thanks Lee - Li

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