I liked this a LOT! Very unique idea and very well written, thanks for the story. =:)
Author's Response: Glad ya liked it. I was sitting at a winery with my mum and her partener when i thought this up, dunno what inspired me, must have been something in the hot chocolate i had. Hope ya read the first one too, that one's short but possibly a better storyline, even if it is rushed. Anyways, glad ya liked it and thanks for the review - Li
Wow... King Thran having someone torture Legolas, and even try and kill him..? What a jerk... this is getting good. Cant wait for next chapter! (and yes, i think this chapter should be finished, its even got a perfect cliffhanger!)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed this and Death Brands. Thanks for suggesting i finish this chapter i was a little annoyed rnbecause i'd written about six chapters after it and i'd numbered them all but you're right, it does make sense to end rnit where i did. Thanks for reviewing - Li
Wow! He was asleep for two whole years?! How did the world survive so long without him?? hehe, just kidding. Its really interesting, though I think your being a bit hard on King Thran. Im sure he loves Legolas, I mean who wouldnt? Keep it up!
Really good! Hope 'Las wakes up soon! Sorry for not getting back to you with the editing thing...do you want me to give you my notes for the second chapter, or will you survive without them, lol?
Author's Response: I'll be fine. I'll probably have the next chapter up by tomorrow but that depends if i can finish it. thanks for reviewingrn - Em