Well done again, Henoluin; the combat scene is gripping and tightly written, and Aragorn's longing for his family is very touching.
I don't have time to read all of this now (it's nearly midnight here in Scotland!) but I'll come back and read the rest soon, I promise.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Narya! Take your time reading the rest. Its not going anywhere! :) I have never had one of my combat scenes called "gripping" before. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks again! ~Hennie Elsilim
Thank you so much for making me a favorite author of your's! I was so surprised. I haven't felt very good about Please, so I was thrilled to find out you like it so much. Have you read the Snowball Fight to Remember? Currently, I'm trying to write some more serious things.
Shadow Maiden (oh, just call me Dae. Ar-feiniel got me into the habit of calling myself that.)
Author's Response: You shouldn't be surprised! You're a really good writer! I totally loved Please. I haven't read Snowball Fight to Remember, yet, but I'm planning on it. Serious stuff or fun, your writing is really good, and I love reading your stuff. Namarie, Dae! ~Hennie Elsilim
Oh, my goodness! This story is the best on this site. Thanks for writing it! This is what inspired me to become a fanfiction writer in the first place. Thanks!
Author's Response: Wow. le hannon, Shadow Maiden! I'm not sure that this story is the best on the site, but I'm so glad you think so! If this story is what inspired you to become a fanfic writer then I'm really glad I wrote it. Thanks so much for the review! It really made me feel good! Namarie, mellon nin, le hannon!
I love this story. It is weird though, you know, you always think of Aragorn being so strong than weak.
Author's Response: Yeah,, thats so true, but everybody has to be weak sometimes, and I guess that has to include Aragorn. lol. Thanks for the review!
Yay! brilliant story. i love aragorn torture. heck i love aragorn but the relationship wouldnt work out...i would be constantly telling him to fall off cliffs and get captured by orcs!lol
brilliant writing keep it up
Author's Response: lol yeah, Aragorn is just more fun when he is getting tortured or into trouble. Sad isnt it? I'm writing yet another Aragorn torture story so be on the look out for it! I should be posting the first chapter soon!
My mum's constantly saying FF's not good for me, but she hasn't banned me as of yet (But as my exams are coming up...*Shudders*)
XD Gotta love the "Aragorn returns after a long absense" stories :D
Author's Response: Ooo, exams. I feel for you. I'm glad to hear I'm not the only one whos parents think that way. Parents should all be like Elrond, and siblings should be like Legolas or the twins. But alas, we don't always get what we want. *sigh*
Hope this makes you feel better. I really enjoy this story, and of course, it's no fun writing if no one reviews. I just came across this this afternoon and am steadily reading through. Your torture scenes and the results seem pretty realistic (I think I said that before). But it's true. Too often, a character is tortured in one scene and fully recovered the next. Very good story. Keep your chin up and keep writing!
P.S. Siblings are hardly ever like Elladan and Elrohir!
Author's Response: Aw thanks, it's true, it isnt much fun writing if no one reviews, and thanks to those who do. Im glad you find the torture realistic. :) I do my best. Thanks for reading!!
How come you don't have more reviews? Great story, Have you posted this elsewhere? The torture seems 'about right' if you can say such a thing. But uh huh, they'd better get to him quick!
Author's Response: No I haven't posted it elsewhere, though I have considered it. I'm glad you like it!
Well, I don't have siblings, and in one way I'm kinda glad, most ff writers complain their ff writing time is cut down because of them!
Aw, the four of them are so cute! *Dramatic music* What will happen next?!
Author's Response: Ah, your so lucky that you dont have siblings! It's true, they make having time to write SO much harder. And as for whats going to happen next: Well that would be telling now wouldnt it? :)
I love the way you write the characters, they seem so real!
Author's Response: Aw really? That makes me feel good. thanks! Of course my stuff wouldnt be anything had professor Tolkien not written them first. Thanks again!