Okay, I would like to say that this is a good story, but I just want to ask what is wrong with the spacing between the paragraphs in the third and fourth chapter thing. Also, I would like to comment that in the second chapter, a part of the third was in the second, and the fount is all weird in some parts of the story. I just wanted to make sure you knew what was up. But this is a good story plot, and The summary sent chills up my spine. I wish I was that good. Happy writing
So glad I found this! I had followed this on another site that I won't name...lol...I now no longer go to that site as I had a virus attack, and really missed some of my favorite stories! I am so happy that I found one of them! YOURS!!