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Title: A Small Start Reviewer: wtyw Signed
turned into a tree flowers, enchanting in every morning and evening; think about changing life trajectory, moving fingertip mottled years; think close to fragrant garden, ordered an Elixir of Love. Run over the Red joys and sorrows, bypassing the eyebrows do not regret, received beautiful quiet tip will meet. Those in the past and your sympathy with the idea, is the most fleeting deep soulful singing, is the soul of warm aroma is pupate into a butterfly dance. If your smile into a breeze, printed on the eyebrows, life will be able to warm. Even horizon right close, as long as well, is sunny. In Chihiro years, I met you, is this life worth consolation harvest. In the corner of the season, smile watch, as you stand in a tree form. After the Fruitful in thin and plump change, "Wide pine does not regret," "is merciless but affectionate." Miss at your fingertips condensed into an undefeated flower. Occasionally inventory that a page on your memory, will be the season that he was originally a Red spectators, wanted to do not pleased not to have compassion, after all, arrived, but the fireworks disturbed, refused to become both good and bad easily winking and color of infatuation lake people. Choose a Moonlit Night, sweet heart, shallow dream. Capture a ray of sunshine at your fingertips dance, that a warm breath of fun, a gorgeous twinkling of an eye wrinkle mood. Once, the other side of time, a tree that tree flowers bright, brilliant blooming, maybe all the good that is to wait for a grand colorful met. Month soft water, soft water moon. A ride the storm, with a ride landscape, not busy I, only fleeting warm, rest assured fly, accompanied by heating. A peek into the rain awakened the slumbering landscape vegetation, has awakened memories of past lives. The rain beat the sound of broken jade stone, such as a Zen sound, and if the fresh air, slowly into the quiet heart of the lake. Misty rain, you elegant figure wading. During leisure, always wanted to twist a clear charge to head Dai teaser, play a cordial smile, then laugh Allure. Should the can and would like to use the Jiangnan misty rain soaked Banzhan Chrysanthemum, write a prosperous marriage, take a trip to the end of time; Should you can, please allow me to read a persistent, spring waiting for you, waiting for you to hold me. Say five hundred years before Buddha bowed down to rub shoulders in exchange, that smile is eternal; life is past and continues; beautiful mountains and water. Think through the corridor of the season, able to precipitate into a beautiful smile. In the plume of incense and roll poetry in Qing Yin shallow sing in a toast with the drink, it is enough to warm the rest of his life. I just want to cut photos of life, taken under your smile; I just want Homecoming where you write into eternity. Until one day, we are getting older, offer of each character will be wearing in the past silhouette. Past that mark, in the heart of the Margaret emanation April day Huiyin pen. Rainy night listening to wind and rain lingering; clear night looking for a glimpse of the lights dim. Every trace of air flowing into all due love fragrance issued, joy
Date: May 14 2017 09:33 pm [Report This]
Title: Three Days Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Fea is an elf's lifeforce, with two little dots above the e. And it's orcs.
Good luck Glorfindel! And yay, you're back ^_^
Date: Apr 23 2008 11:29 am [Report This]
Title: Help Reviewer: HHS Signed
Not Erestor!!!
Date: Nov 04 2007 04:46 pm [Report This]
Title: Help Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Nice chapter! You write Glorfindel really well!

Author's Response: I find that a little funny really. Iíve never read the Silmarillion, and when it came to Glorfindel and Erestor in the Trilogy, I canít remember them very well. I keep trying to pick my books back up and read them again, but I always seem to miss them when I read them. Iím glad that I can capture Glorfindel for you. I hope to be able to continue that in the future, and be able to find more about these characters as I go along.rnrnThanks for the review!
Date: Nov 04 2007 11:48 am [Report This]
Title: A Small Start Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Well, XD, I already have two betas, but if I ever need anyone else I'll come straught to you! My email's :D Hope to hear from you soon!
Date: Nov 02 2007 01:51 pm [Report This]
Title: Cold Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Question: Are you looking for a beta? Or do you have one? If not, I'd love to beta this for you.

:O Poor Erestor! I hope he'll be ok!

Author's Response: I would LOVE a beta. All my normal ones haven't returned my last three stories, so I stopped sending them.rnrnIf it isn't too much trouble, i would love if you betaed for me. And i would love to beta for you if ever you need it.
Date: Nov 02 2007 09:33 am [Report This]
Title: A Small Start Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
I've noticed that your tenses seem to switch a lot. It might just be me, but you might want to check it

Author's Response: Ah! THAT is the kind of help I need. Thank you, and I will look at that, re-read it, and edit it. Thank you again!
Date: Nov 02 2007 09:24 am [Report This]
Title: A Small Start Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Ok, to add mulitple characters, you need to click "ctrl" whilst making your selections.
Intriguing start! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Oh! Thank you! i hope to keep adding to this today, as well as many days to come. I am glad you enjoyed what i have so far. Thank you for reading!
Date: Nov 01 2007 08:39 am [Report This]
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