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Ah, lovely fluff! Well written and the plot is quick and easy to follow. Well done!
Very fluffy! I didn't pick up any mistakes. It was surprisingly innocent - why was Primula so tired? I guess I was waiting for the who-pushed-who debate. Oh well, full marks for fluffiness.
Happy Writing,
Charli
True, but I love the way you have him caring for "mummy." Oh, and a question: Was the "Fauntling" supposed to be referring to a baby hobbit?
Author's Response: I believe that a 'fauntling' is a toddler hobbit, not an infant. Somebody correct me if I am wrong.
Awww, cute!
Author's Response: Frodo is cute no matter what age. He is fun to write about.
Bawwwwwww, so cute. :D
Author's Response: So glad you like it! Had a wonderful time writing a wee Frodo. :D