It wasn't crap, it was pretty good! Especially for five minutes work...it takes me at least five minutes to think of a single sentence!
Aw, poor Aragorn in the first bit.
Author's Response: Haha! Thankls for that! I really appreciate it! Yeah, I feel sorry for him too... :)
Ah, great! A little bit overly-modern language from the fellowship, but aside from that...*evil grin*
an overfed goblin. i like that.
Author's Response: Hehe, yeah I was a little worried about the language, but I didn't feel like spending to much time on it. It's about a Mary Sue and it was killing me to write it at all. I shudder to think of it. Thanks for the reveiw! I really appreciate it!