Reviews For Shadowfax
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Reviewer: oelberethgilthoniel Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/01/08 - 01:53 pm Title: Shadowfax

You have a wonderfully wild outlook in this poem. Once again, I ask, how did you get so good?

OEG

Author's Response: I was trying to capture the earthy feel I get every time I read about Shadowfax. I think the movie did it horrible wrong to have Shadowfax be an Arabian, he is just so much more powerful than a slighty wimpy show-horse. Once again, I say, I write what I know about. NZ

Reviewer: faramiriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/11/07 - 02:19 pm Title: Shadowfax

Pretty nice, but I didn't really like the way it was all one-word lines. I liked the first stanza best.

Author's Response: I completely agree with you! I think it is almost manifest destiny that all amateur poets should write a one-word-per-line poem. However, I'll see what I can do about that.

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