You have a wonderfully wild outlook in this poem. Once again, I ask, how did you get so good?
Author's Response: I was trying to capture the earthy feel I get every time I read about Shadowfax. I think the movie did it horrible wrong to have Shadowfax be an Arabian, he is just so much more powerful than a slighty wimpy show-horse. Once again, I say, I write what I know about. NZ
Pretty nice, but I didn't really like the way it was all one-word lines. I liked the first stanza best.
Author's Response: I completely agree with you! I think it is almost manifest destiny that all amateur poets should write a one-word-per-line poem. However, I'll see what I can do about that.