Whoa. That was actually really freaky. I think that's exactly how he felt and what he saw. That was good. Gave me goosebumps.
Author's Response: That's high praise, my thanks. It's always surprised me that people don't think much about Gollum's struggle with the Ring, besides the whole 'love/hate' relationship. NZ
that was............. kinda sad................................it sounds like something my best friend would write!
Author's Response: Really? This was a foray into the post modernist poetry for me. . . I'm still not sure if I like it or not! NZ
Creepy! How do you write poetry so well?
Author's Response: Well, I write horrible poetry having to do with Mild Earth, a.k.a. reality. They say that to write good poetry, you have to write about what you are passionate about, and I guess I just know more about Middle Earth than about Mild Earth. NZ