I liked this very much. It is like a beginning of some lay of the last Elves in Middle-Earth. This is quite an atmospheric poem.
Author's Response: Thank you. It was written on the way back from visiting relatives: We were flying over some beautiful mountains into the sunset, and were low enough to see campgrounds and the such. While it doesn't sound very inspiring, something about that image gave off a little spark. NZ
I had shivers going down my back with that one.
When I read this, I see a golden sunset, with people around a fire being very pensive and serious.
Author's Response: That sounds a lot like the image I have, except mine is when the people are sitting at a campfire looking at the stars, and the sun has just gone down. NZ
i would have loved this except for the fact the the phrase "think back" always makes me think of Merlin, and Merlin makes me laugh. Aside from that, it was great!!! :D
Author's Response: "Arthur, THINK!!" Teehee, I love that line. Thank you for the review!! SMEE