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Reviewer: Narya Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/02/09 - 11:59 am Title: "Not more of them!"

Nice job Freya; this is really funny :) several different types of Mary Sue in one story...my eyes ache from the beauty...well done.

Author's Response: Thanks! The most fun was trying to think of a sue, and then think up the names... :D

Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/09 - 07:47 pm Title: "Not more of them!"

Hehe, this story is accurately funny. I like it! Sam's anxiety is accurate too and they just brush it off! *Giggles* That's so Sue! :-)

meerkatalex

Author's Response: Heh heh, I had no idea it was so fun to be sueish. This one's also kind of at a stand still... thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Pink Siamese Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/10/08 - 10:28 pm Title: "Not more of them!"

Okay, that's pretty funny. ;-)

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/08 - 06:53 pm Title: "Not more of them!"

Excellente! Love it XD

Author's Response: Thanks! I just started writing chapter two, so hopefully it will come out soon. Thanks again! Feya :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I just started writing chapter two, so hopefully it will come out soon. Thanks again! Feya :)

Reviewer: Junior Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/08 - 08:13 am Title: "Not more of them!"

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. So funny. I love it!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I had a blast writing it. I'll start writing Chapter Two soon. rnThanks! Freya :D

Reviewer: xFanarix Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/08 - 07:52 am Title: "Not more of them!"

* Snort giggle * I hope you kill them in slow and painful ways, although Gimli seems too straighforward for what I was thinking. I did realize that the mistakes were on perpouse , classic.

Author's Response: Muahahaha . . . ! What I was origionally going to do was have them fight eachother or something like that . . . rnbut when I started to write it down somethng else happened entirely. The reason I picked Gimli as being the only rnone to stop them is because I am pretty sure he is one of the only Characters who does not have a Sue. rnI'll admit, I haven't gotten very far past chapter one as to what the plot is going to be . . . *sheepish grin*. BUt I just rnhad an idea hile writing this, so I'm rather pleased with you right at the moment!rnTa! Freya :D

Reviewer: Junior Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/08 - 07:44 am Title: "Not more of them!"

All i've read is the names, but they are so beautiful and have touched my soul so much i had to let you know.


hahahahahaha. fantastic

Author's Response: :D Thanks! I had the most fun with writing rnAquamarine Moonbeam Sunlight Stardust Flowerpetal Fairyglitter Waterstone Firebird's name. I never expected them to touch anyone's soul, though . . . cool!rn :D Freyarn

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