Wow, I am IMPRESSED that you're writing in Quenya. Amazing! I especially like the last two verses.
Author's Response: Thank you, Ria. I started learning Quenya when the Two Towers came out, and I started writing poetry about a year ago. As you can tell, I've been an avid fan of LotR for quite some time now. All of my friends will tell you I'm obsessed.
This was interesting, i've never thought about trying to write a poem in elvish, my hat goes off to you, very clever. I couldn't quite read the elvish version but i think i managed pretty well, i've only been part of this fandom less than a year and i think i've done very well although i could probably care more for the dwarves and the hobbits . . . nah, elvish all the way, and vampire. What can i say? I'm obsessed. I might actually add this to my faves, it's too clever to ignore - Li
Author's Response: Wow, thank you, Lira. Ive seen your name a lot in the 'most recent', and i like vampires myself so I will definately read some of your material. Much appreciated review.