Reviews For Blind prejudices
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Reviewer: Reaveth Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/04/10 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 1. The fall

I like it! It's pretty well thought out, but there are some spelling mistakes (in example, around the begining of the story, you spelled "meat" "meet".) Just a few simple mistakes, but otherwise, pretty frappling awesome.

Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/09 - 02:05 am Title: Chapter 2. Taken

I liked this piece of humor: 'Why did things like this always happen to them?'
Again, wonderful descriptions, like Legolas feeling danger as 'a bolt of energy'. The prejudice bit was woven in nicely, how they feared he would bespell them, how they blamed him for landslides... oh dear, this a bad situation...

Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/09 - 02:20 am Title: Chapter 1. The fall

Lovely discriptions; this one actually warms me up: "First rays of light washed over the treetops, melting the darkness."
The theme of prejudice is interesting.
Ach! Cliffie. I hope to get to the next chapter soon. :)

Author's Response: I'll try to come up with the next chapter fast. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/07/09 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1. The fall

I like the way you show a lively friendship between them. I think the story will be easier to read, however, if you put another space between paragraphs.

Like this, to break it up.

Author's Response: Thank you for the suggestion))

Reviewer: Fishpaste Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/08 - 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 1. The fall

Hey! THis sound really good! Update soon please.

Author's Response: I'll try to. I'm really happy that you liked it.

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