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Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 3 Captivity

Some spelling mistakes:
plain, not plane

This is getting more interesting by the update!

NZ

Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/01/08 - 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 1 Before the storm

anyone's notice, not anyone notive.

I am really enjoying this story. Keep it up, update frequently!! Please!

NZ

Author's Response: Thank you! And sorry for mistakes once more. I'll try to write more soon.

Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/01/08 - 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 1 Before the storm

piece, not peace,

leave, not live

cursed, not coursed

I like where this is going.

NZ

Author's Response: Thanks! For both reviewing and pointing my mistakes. I'll mind them.

Reviewer: Sharpe_and_Harper Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/01/08 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 1 Before the storm

Oh, I really like this! It's very, very well written; the discriptions were fabulous. Wonderful work...please add more soon! Take care, and God bless!



Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'll try to write soon. I know i have mistakes there and i'll try to be more attentive next time.

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