This is very good, but perhaps instead of 'oh' you should write, 'P.S.' It seems more likely that someone would write that in a letter. Other than that, I like the way you're beginning your story. Congrats on the new story, arulia34
Author's Response: Well, we kinda figured that P.S. from the Latin "post scriptum" probably wouldn't have made any sense to a sensible hobbit like Isumbras. ;-) Ant līn vīr mi gūr nīn!