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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
This was a very enjoyable story to read.

There are some missing words such as "a" and "the" (demonstrative), but besides that, it was a great story!

NZ

Author's Response: Thanks!!!
Date: 26/01/08 - 01:12 pm [Report This]
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