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Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/01/08 - 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was a very enjoyable story to read.

There are some missing words such as "a" and "the" (demonstrative), but besides that, it was a great story!

NZ

Author's Response: Thanks!!!

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