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Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/08 - 06:35 am Title: Chapter 5

Great chapter! Poor Elrond, lol, being shoved by te big strong warrior ^_^

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/05/08 - 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 4

XD Get in there Glorfindel! He was practically falling over himself to help...and what WILL Erestor do? Be a shame if Glorfindel saved him from freezing only to have him die of a heartattack! Please update soon!

Reviewer: arulia34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/08 - 04:52 am Title: Chapter 3

Woah, I hope the little Elf will be alright! I really enjoyed this chapter - I can't wait to see Elrond's reaction when he finds out Glorfindel was telling the truth. Well done, this is indefinitely a favourite! ^.^

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/08 - 05:13 am Title: Chapter 2

Wow, pretty good start!

Reviewer: arulia34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/08 - 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Your understanding of words is very good, but you have to watch out for repeating them, like this: 'The animals were still nervous, looking around nervously'. Other than that, great chapter! I can't wait to see where this leads.

Author's Response: I wrote that?! I hate repeatings and now look at that. :P Probably a forgotten leftover from revising and changing the sentence. Thanks for pointing it out. Nice to see you like it!

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