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Title: Chapter 5 Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Great chapter! Poor Elrond, lol, being shoved by te big strong warrior ^_^
Date: Jun 05 2008 01:35 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4 Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
XD Get in there Glorfindel! He was practically falling over himself to help...and what WILL Erestor do? Be a shame if Glorfindel saved him from freezing only to have him die of a heartattack! Please update soon!
Date: May 14 2008 12:53 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3 Reviewer: arulia34 Signed
Woah, I hope the little Elf will be alright! I really enjoyed this chapter - I can't wait to see Elrond's reaction when he finds out Glorfindel was telling the truth. Well done, this is indefinitely a favourite! ^.^
Date: Mar 10 2008 11:52 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Wow, pretty good start!
Date: Mar 04 2008 11:13 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: arulia34 Signed
Your understanding of words is very good, but you have to watch out for repeating them, like this: 'The animals were still nervous, looking around nervously'. Other than that, great chapter! I can't wait to see where this leads.

Author's Response: I wrote that?! I hate repeatings and now look at that. :P Probably a forgotten leftover from revising and changing the sentence. Thanks for pointing it out. Nice to see you like it!
Date: Mar 02 2008 12:51 pm [Report This]
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