Reviews For The Mirror
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Reviewer: Daewen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/10/09 - 01:37 pm Title: A forgotten pool

I've always loved this poem.

Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/08 - 04:19 am Title: A forgotten pool

This is a great topic for a poem. I think it might almost be better with an off-rhyme scheme than a straight rhyme scheme . . . more distant, you know.

Author's Response: Probably-but odd rhyme scemes have always fascinated me. So The first and second verse wrote themselves, and the rest I had to think about to follow the pattern. But yeah....distant works.

Reviewer: urylia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/08 - 01:06 am Title: A forgotten pool

Amazing!! Beautifully written!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/08 - 11:08 pm Title: A forgotten pool

Wow! That was lovely.
For a second, I thought I was reading the long lost twin to my poem!
Thank you!
NZ

Author's Response: No problem- this one challenged me. Thanks for reviewing. Wow-that makes two reviews in an hour....Cool!

Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/08 - 04:56 pm Title: A forgotten pool

That's a lovely poem of The Lady of Light's mirror lying abandoned in the weed-wild garden of Caras Galadon. In "Arwen's Journey" the mirror is still being occasionally used by one of Galadriel's protegees.

Author's Response: Ah...thanks for the review. This one was kinda hard to write- partly because I've never thought about it before, and it was a wiered rhyme sceme.

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