CLEVER borrowing from "Pinnafore". You have the scansion and syllables as close to G & S as possible. Delightful!
Author's Response: Thank you. I carried this around with me for two months before I got enough to post. ;-) Happy reading! NZ
She is definitely an improved one, if she knows geography and anything about Elendil, Gil galad and the Lay of Leithien! O.o. Lol, that is extremely clever.
Author's Response: Thank you! I was thinking this would be something of an advertisement for the new! Mary Sue Deluxe Package. NZ
Heheheheh. I love it: she is the modern Mary Sue whose author will defend her by saying, "But she can't sing!"
Two spelling mistakes (which maybe you intended for the character; if so, ignore) it's DunEdain and Lay of Leithian.
Author's Response: I intended the spelling mistakes for my Mary Sue ( after all, she IS a Mary Sue, no matter how many special features she has). I'm glad you liked that phrase. Now, hopefully I will be updating the last four verses soon, but I need to complete the rhyming scheme. NZ
I'm a little confused.... who is Marry Sue?
Author's Response: Ahhh. Mary Sue is the stunningly gorgeous, completely atrocious, rather precocious original character, generally a self insert (author living out there fantasies). Also, most of the male characters within a 50 league radius falls madly in love with her. She is THE ONE TO SAVE THE WORLD FROM THIS PRESENT DARKNESS. And if you order now for 19.99, you will get a free! sickeningly cute animal side kick. However, this Mary Sue is new and improved! meaning that she has special features, which are described the piece. I hope this helps! NZ