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Title: Alone Reviewer: Deadly Shadow Signed
*cry* I can't rate!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03/16/08 10:09 am [Report This]
Title: Alone Reviewer: Deadly Shadow Signed
CHICKEN FINGERS RULE!!!!!!

Author's Response: YAY!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02/25/08 04:02 pm [Report This]
Title: Alone Reviewer: Deadly Shadow Signed
CHICKEN FINGERS!!!!

Author's Response: Crip.....um.............. how are you spelling that again?
Date: 02/23/08 11:23 am [Report This]
Title: Alone Reviewer: Deadly Shadow Signed
heehee

Author's Response: *sigh*
Date: 02/22/08 03:57 pm [Report This]
Title: Alone Reviewer: Deadly Shadow Signed
*cry*

P.S. (it's me, Lizzie, I forgot what ,my other penname was so I made a new one)

Author's Response: *sigh* I kinda guessed that when I saw the newest member thing..............
Date: 02/21/08 12:31 pm [Report This]
Title: Alone Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed
I'm sure Sam's duties as Mayor of the Shire would have meant he would be away for weeks at a time on official business. But I'm sure that Rosie's poem would have earned her a lot of hugs, kisses and tears of joy upon his return. You put a lot of thought and emotion into your first poem. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 02/18/08 07:33 am [Report This]
Title: Alone Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
You have a couple of spelling mistakes in here:
Smiling, not smileing
Vanished, not vanised,
Rumors, not rumer
Sometimes, not somrtimes


However, barring the spelling mistakes, I really enjoyed this poem. It captures something indescribably sad, yet hopeful.

One critique I might make is the single word "But..." in the middle of the poem: It works well as a leading line to the last stanza, but I think there might be some more "in character" synonyms . . . Maybe "However" or "Still" or something along those lines.

I hope you write some more poems!

NZ

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I always have with spelling.
Date: 02/17/08 02:08 pm [Report This]
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