Whoa!This was rlly amazing!
It had a really great ending tht
kept me interested! You need
to do a sequel!!!!! Amazing job!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm happy you think so. A writer loves to hear that a story has kept a reader interested. I'd do a sequel if I could find the time. But never say never. I love the word amazing. :o)
Oh, what an ominous ending! Apart from the obvious choice of presenting Sauron as the cause for this aberration it would also be fun to have appear as a portal to *somewhere* else. I just can't shake my love for crossovers:) Still, I always like things that feel a little off and that are not explained in the greatest detail. Gives me something to think about!
Author's Response: Forgive my delay in responding. (I've been working on a story for Teitho!) A portal to another world would have been neat. Too bad I didn't think of it. :o) I've never written a crossover before. I'll have to try that one of these days. I also like things a little off sometimes. And it's fun to leave a bit of a mystery for the readers.
That was a truly exciting tale of survival. You may want to edit the story, however. Somehow, the last third of the text was repeated.
Author's Response: I'm very pleased you were entertained by my little tale. Thanks for telling me about the error. I corrected it.
Uh-oh! Why am I thinking of the Donner Party?
Author's Response: That's one of my favorite stories in history. Awful as it is, I find it fascinating. ~Elladan looked at his brother. "Here, Elrohir, take a nibble of my arm. You need the sustenance."~ (I couldn't resist.) :o)
You really love torturing those four, don't you? lol, this looks really interesting, please update soon!
Author's Response: I'm innocent! It's the evil plot bunny that does it. :o) Glad you find it interesting. I'll update as soon as I can.