Reviews For Dangerous Crossing
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Title: Chapter One Reviewer: Relian Signed
well, lol
I like the word amazing as well!
AND never say never!
(P.S i hope u do get around to it!)

Author's Response: Glad we both agree. Someday I might indeed 'get around to it'. :o)
Date: 10/26/08 07:23 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter One Reviewer: Relian Signed
Whoa!This was rlly amazing!
It had a really great ending tht
kept me interested! You need
to do a sequel!!!!! Amazing job!
-Relian

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm happy you think so. A writer loves to hear that a story has kept a reader interested. I'd do a sequel if I could find the time. But never say never. I love the word amazing. :o)
Date: 10/17/08 08:58 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter Two Reviewer: Michelle Signed
Oh, what an ominous ending! Apart from the obvious choice of presenting Sauron as the cause for this aberration it would also be fun to have appear as a portal to *somewhere* else. I just can't shake my love for crossovers:) Still, I always like things that feel a little off and that are not explained in the greatest detail. Gives me something to think about!

Author's Response: Forgive my delay in responding. (I've been working on a story for Teitho!) A portal to another world would have been neat. Too bad I didn't think of it. :o) I've never written a crossover before. I'll have to try that one of these days. I also like things a little off sometimes. And it's fun to leave a bit of a mystery for the readers.
Date: 03/08/08 06:35 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter Two Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed
That was a truly exciting tale of survival. You may want to edit the story, however. Somehow, the last third of the text was repeated.

Author's Response: I'm very pleased you were entertained by my little tale. Thanks for telling me about the error. I corrected it.
Date: 02/29/08 03:00 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter One Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed
Uh-oh! Why am I thinking of the Donner Party?

Author's Response: That's one of my favorite stories in history. Awful as it is, I find it fascinating. ~Elladan looked at his brother. "Here, Elrohir, take a nibble of my arm. You need the sustenance."~ (I couldn't resist.) :o)
Date: 02/24/08 05:06 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter One Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
You really love torturing those four, don't you? lol, this looks really interesting, please update soon!

Author's Response: I'm innocent! It's the evil plot bunny that does it. :o) Glad you find it interesting. I'll update as soon as I can.
Date: 02/24/08 10:05 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter One Reviewer: arulia34 Signed
Woah, this looks fantastic!! Great job, can't wait to hear more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm very glad you like it so far. I plan on updating next week.
Date: 02/21/08 03:26 am [Report This]
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