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Reviewer: elrond_peredhel Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/03/08 - 05:44 pm Title: 1/1

ok... try looking at your punctuation and sentence structure- a little hard to follow, and maybe sub the word lover for something else- you use it quite a lot!

other than that, fantastic! XD

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