Ok, I am really glad that you updated, I have been waiting for a long time. One thing. I am having trouble concentrating, and as easy as it is to write large block pages, could you please try writing smaller paragraphs? those really long ones make it slightly difficult (For me) to read, and LOTR and SW are my two favorite things. And technically I think every time there is dialog or dialog switches between two people, you should start a new paragraph.
Thank you for writing!!!
Author's Response: Please be patient with me, I seem to be having some formatting problems with my lastest update. I type everything up in MS word and then cut and paste. When I tried to make the corrections to help you, it ended up in a long column and looked almost like a section of Beowulf. Will look into it further to make adjustments.
I'm onto this :-D I would have never thought of crossing Rings and SW, but now I think I'm inspired.
Anyway, I love, love love it!
Author's Response: Glad you like it!! I always thought a elven Jedi would be totally awesome!
Good story. I love the way you incorporated two stories into one or shall I say to worlds? It makes it that much more interesting. But please ...do continue. I will be expecting the next chapter ...when you are ready to post it that is.LOL! Keep up the good work. Maria.
Author's Response: Glad to know you're enjoying the story. I'll have to take a look at your story because I've often played around with the idea of elves still living deep in the Canadian wilderness (that's what I had in mind with Lauren's family).
In my opinion, she should stay in Middle Earth. She seems like she needs to do something in Middle Earth that she wouldn't be able to do with the Jedi. By the way, this is a very interesting and inventive story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
She should stay in ME, at least for a while. Perhaps someone could come to her from the Jedi and take the information she has. Your decision, of course. I like y our story but she has unfinished business in ME, I think. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thanks for your opinion, This is exactly what I was thinking, but sometimes its good to hear from others too. Glad you liked the story so far.