:D I like the way you're doing a scene from more than one POV, it gives a better insight into the characters.
;D Love the Glorfindel you've written here, interesting how he's not believed at first, and how he's not as strong as many portray him :D Love it, please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it. I'm not really fond of the fanon characters, so I try to do them differently. I'll try to update soon!
:O What's wrong with Glorfindel?! Is it Pst-Traumatic Stress Syndrome from Gondolien or something? Or is he just cracking up? Poor elf
Author's Response: He'd certainly have every reasom to crack up. :P You'll see soon!