This is very well written. You did a great job, it flows well and sounds very beautiful. You say in your summary that you used eleven based names, I don't see any in this poem, but I if you use them I warn you that I think that Tolkien's language is copyrighted, so you can't use it. This looks like it's going to be a great book, good luck and all the best :-) ~GA

Author's Response: Thanx