I like this a lot. Your depiction of Gondor inspires a real sense of pride and awe in the reader; nice work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm always a little iffy about letting people read my poetry so your review helps me a feel better about it. =)
Woah, that's good!! Better than anything i could come up with right now. I'm trapped in my grandparent's house and it's terrible even though it's in NZ. God i can't wait for Thursday!! Anyway, nice poem and i hope you can come up with some others like this and never doubt yourself mate, you'd be surprised, trust me - Li
Author's Response: Awwww, thanks Hun! I'm glad you liked and that you don't think its totally awful. Sorry that your stuck at your grandparents! ;)
I liked it. It sounds as if you long to visit Minas Tirith during the Fourth Age.
Author's Response: Yeah, I would totally LOVE to visit Minas Tirith! Thanks for the review, and I'm really glad that you liked it. :)