That was very good! Your writing is very creative. I liked the whole thing I hope you can get around to writing another chapter!
Author's Response: ... Thanks ^L^ This was totally unexpected but I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review - Breia
Sweet story, you should write more, let us know what happens
Author's Response: Yeah, i think i might but i wanna get at least a third of this history assignment gone before i start writing frequently again. Anyways, i'm glad ya like it and i hope i'll be able to update it soon - Li