Reviews For A New Beginning
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Reviewer: taursuluiel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/11 - 07:22 am Title: Chapter 2

Please continue your story :) i love the 2 first chapter

Reviewer: Elwyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/04/08 - 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 2

liked the new chapter

Author's Response: Thanks!!!

Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/08 - 07:31 am Title: Chapter 1

You've written a good opening for your story. The characters sound interesting. My only criticism is that you should use only three or four symbols to separate your scenes. A whole line of them sometimes causes technical difficulties on the website due to the nature of the program.

Author's Response: Thanks I'll remember that! I hope to have my second chapter up soon!

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