Reviews For A New Beginning
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Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: taursuluiel Signed
Please continue your story :) i love the 2 first chapter
Date: 08/02/11 03:22 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Elwyn Signed
liked the new chapter

Author's Response: Thanks!!!
Date: 04/15/08 12:28 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed
You've written a good opening for your story. The characters sound interesting. My only criticism is that you should use only three or four symbols to separate your scenes. A whole line of them sometimes causes technical difficulties on the website due to the nature of the program.

Author's Response: Thanks I'll remember that! I hope to have my second chapter up soon!
Date: 04/09/08 03:31 am [Report This]
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