Oh, wow! I love the description of the gig in Moria, the detail that the accordion is a dwarvish invention (of course!! how logical!) and the fact that you used not one, not two, but THREE different ideas from the challenge. You rule.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! The challenge was just too tempting to pass by. Also, it was very funny to write this one.
I really enjoyed this. I especially loved the part about the gig in Moria and the orc fans! It was also hilarious to read about a smashed Thranduil; not many fanfic authors write about the wood-elves after they've had their Dorwinion wine.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Well, my story is not as bad as "The Hobbit", in that two Elves actually pass out. I wonder if Elves do have a hangover after boozing...
The story is very "tousshing". I have never read a fanfic with a sloshed King Thranduil but you have done an excellent job* applauds Formegil*.
Considering the fact that English is not your first language, you have done a marvellous job. I hardly found any mistakes, just few small ones. But then, that's the critic in me talking*grins*.
Keep writing. The mental picture of an Elvish polka band is going to keep me laughing for sometime.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I needed to relieve some stress, and browsing this site I found the challenge. As I listen sometimes schlager and polka myself, this idea appealed to me. Especially since there are so many bad lyrics to make fun of. Good to know you liked my story.