Asalways this was a beautifully written piece. It was so real, it was obviously written from your heart. You've expressed Estel's emotions in an amazing way. I look forward to your next piece
Author's Response: Thanks, Elwyn. Iím glad to know that the writing felt so real to you. The next story is coming up soon, but I warn you, it will be rather different than what Iíve posted so far. :-)
I agree, this felt so real I felt the pain in my heart. It brought tears to my eyes.
Author's Response: As far as Iím concerned, the greatest compliment that I can receive as a writer is to know that I have been able to move my readers and stir their emotions with my words. Thanks so much for reviewing!
I really love this piece. Aragorn's feelings ring so very true and he is trying to assimilate so much. yes, I can see this was written with heart - although I think all your work is . It always shows as a kind of passion and intensity that sets some writers apart from others.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Fanarix! I must admit that I love your reviews! I would agree that I do write with passion and intensity, however, I think that the next story I am going to post might come as a surprise. Iím always experimenting with my writing and challenging myself, so it is rather different than my usual style, although that is not to say that it doesnít have an intensity and passion of its own. Thanks again.